The Battle Arena: Rap World Cup 2004

[Lyricalistic]

This is a tournament version of the Battle Arena Thread started by me. Now this works slightly different, if you are not:

Dave123
Lyricalistic
Revolution
A_D
mz_baybee
Sincere
MiSs_iMmAtUrE

"THEN YOU CANNOT PLAY" you will have to wait for the next tournament.

Heres the rules:

Rule Number 1 - Use Your Own Raps (NO EXEPTIONS)
Rule Number 2 - Stay Out If You Are Not In The Tournament (Read Above)
Rule Number 3 - You Can Forfeit And Quit
Rule Number 4 - No Dissing Of Mothers, That Is Cheap... Girlfriends ar OK
Rule Number 5 - Spit No More Than 16 Bars. (Means Lines)
Rule Number 6 - Other Rappers Not Taking Part, Vote The Rapper They Think Have Won... I Announce The Winner Or Sincere Does In My Case
Rule Number 7 - If You Do Not Reply Withing 48 Hours To Another Rappers Rap, It Will Be Taken As A Forfeit.
Rule Number 8 - Have Fun

Judges will be looking for, Flow, The Rhyming Of Sentences, How Relevant Your Rap Is In Accordance To The Other Rapper And Battlement, Most Of All Do You Kill The Other Rapper.

The Structure:

Round 1:
Match A: Rapper 1 Vs 2
Match B: Rapper 3 Vs 4
Match C: Rapper 5 Vs 6

Semi-Final:
Match D: Winner Match A Vs Winner Match B
Match E: Winner Match C Vs Rapper 7

Final:
Match F: Winner Match D Vs Winner Match E

Champion: Winner Match F


Judge With The Final Say: Lyricalistic

[Lyricalistic]

Round 1:

Match A: Dave123 Vs Miss Immature
Match B: A_D Vs Mz Baybee
Match C: Sincere Vs Revolution

Deadline: 29th April 2004

[GaWjU$$ PuNjAbI $tUd]

shudnt there b a equal say 2 who wins??...

i think the public hav the final say .... not just lyricalisitic

[Lyricalistic]

"Rule Number 6 - Other Rappers Not Taking Part, Vote The Rapper They Think Have Won... I Announce The Winner Or Sincere Does In My Case"

Which means everyone votes then I count them and announce the winner. If you don't like it, open your own thread.

Open your eyes you punk, read the rules, besides you not in this so stay out.

"Rule Number 2 - Stay Out If You Are Not In The Tournament"

[Sincere]

GPS we will have 5 judges in each match, thats enough.
And if u wanna vote be sure u contest in the next tour.............

One

[Dave132]

@ Lyricalistic
nice 1 bro like the rules, bit dodgy how u got the automatic bye,but you started the idea so fair play!!!
@ Gawuss Panjabi Stud
whoever wins, is goin to have deserved to win regardless or not wether lyricalistic has the last say.
i'll drop my verse 2moz
jus wana say gud luck to everyone and as Stiffler wud say 'it's on like donkey kong ******!'

[A_D]

@ lyricalistic

nice one bro, just gotta clarify one thing: each battle has two runs right? and the battler you've listed first drops the first rap (i.e. in my case i start it off) no?

[Lyricalistic]

@ A_D my brother thats entirey up to you who drops the first verse, you gna make it relevant to the other rapper so I don't think it matters much, If you want you can drop 2 straight and wait for replys. But it must be 2 verses of 16 bars.

@ Sincere Yeah you right once again bro, rappers will vote for other rappers only, then I or anyone can finalise the count.

@ Dave123 hahah Yeah well we had to get the boat off the shore, some people prefer biching rather then taking part and we waited enough for added contestants and it looked like the rest are simply too scared to join in. So I just started it off.

[Sincere]

sup Lyric what if the battles tie?????

and can i like drop already or do i have to wait for Match A & B?

Good luck to the others.............

One

[Lyricalistic]

Sincere bro I already thought of that, which is why I voted Me as the judge with the final say. That which GPS misunderstood.. If there are any quibbles I have the final say. Unless anybody else wants it???

[Sincere]

i understand that when someone gets 3 votes he/she won the battle.
but i mean u battle eachother twice.............what if that ties?
Then u cant go and say "he or she should go thru" cuz the other judges voted for a tie.

[Lyricalistic]

Nah bro, first rapper raps, next rapper, then the first then the second then you vote once both verses are up.. that would mean..... 5 rappers will vote for. that will mean 3 votes wins.. simple as. You cannot vote a tie. You must vote a rapper. If we can't distinguish a winner, we could ask for another verse per rapper????

[Sincere]

aha i thought we get to to vote after every round but now its clear to me...............

[Revolution]

yeah tats "sweet" man im checked in.....verses in by 29th april so is tat day or night due to the limits and difference in time??.......hey sincere all the best man......lol tis gonna be fun.....all the best to everyone else cant wait to read some of ur verses peeps.....

respect the game peace

[Revolution]

wat u mean by rule number 5 16 lines or is it 16 bars

bar is like "i ate a cat, and got so fat
tat my fat *** had an attack and landed on the mat//" (1 bar)

or is it "i ate a cat, and got so fat (1st line)
tat my fat *** had an attack and landed on the mat//" (2nd line)

holla back.....the revolution begins peace hehe

[Dave132]

wots the deal then wiv the battles then?
1 verse is spit by each contestant or is it for instance
i drop a verse, then miss immature drops a verse, then i drop another & finally she drops another?
gimme 20 mins i'll post mine first

[Dave132]

This ho couldnt drop a decent rhyme if she was Bill Shakespeare,
Quit while i'm ahead & get ur immature *** outta here,
All of a sudden u drop a few verses n think u own this forum,
I'd type 'Zzzz' if i spat after u, as u take mc's n bore em,
You're not phat with lyrics n i think you'll agree,
That u don't have any wordplay to test my ability,
This b***h is only her keyboard, cuz her biro's on strike,
Your lacking fingers, not even the keys feel wot u type,
You could kiss a SARS victim n still not spit ill,
I married style n gave birth to talent, while u divorced skill,
Come like abortions, im battling foetuses that werent quite ready,
Claim u hold mics, but ur grip was never quite steady,
After i win this bout, i gota beat another little b***h,
But i won't use words again, just win with a nipple twist,
3-0 the scores will read, it'll be a KO like we was fighting,
Your lyrics would only be electric, if u was struck by lightning!

Miss Immature it's over to u

[A_D]

I'm droppin my first verse now cos I won't have time later in the week...

You'll be wondrin how time flies when in 16 lines I'ma make ya realize
The only thing you winnin' today is the effort prize
Ain't no more reason to keep the rhyming beast locked up
Cocked 8 bars, snipe at ya hot, they gun get ya knocked up
Got my rhymes growin inside o this b*tch like lyrical incest
Tearin ya up, this sh*t about to turn into a raw ****** meat fest
Mz 'I'm nice like that', Mz '3 language multilingual'
Mz 'I'm da bomb', Mz more like 'in 50 years I'll still be single'
She came and all she dropped was room for jokes: this h*e lame!
No-name punks like her maiming the game, it's a damn shame
You got no flow, no text, just get the f*ck outa my life
It's stupid h*es like you be givin' battlerap strife
You think rap is bliss? Then you can die for this
Underworld's own herald bringin' ya the devil's icy kiss
It's so simple b*tch, you've had your last card dealt
The tarot means death, my sentiments ain't heart-felt

[MiSs_iMmAtUrE]

bich pleed, get on yo knees and scream out for more
becoz wen i start my ***** ill be kickin yo *** off the floor..
trying to rap bich u aint nothing compared me,
spitting out words like venom u aint my cup of tea..
Like christina aguilera, Im A fighter with pride
so when i start my beats bich please step aside.
im a chick with ability not masculinity
so watch out before i start 2 give u a rapping penalty
in my facility, u cant even match up to my speciality
so when u aint watching ur back ima give u a rapping fatality
u better be prepared coz my skillz r sublime to sacrafice ur ***
i got tricks up my sleeves 2 put u into 1 big mass
u can try bich plz, but u aint doin me no favours
ima bring it out loud till i wake up the neighbours
so before u start to strike n start judging me
remember it aint over till i end it as easy as 1,2,3

[Lyricalistic]

Just reminding peeps 2moro is judgment day..... (30th April) so make sure your verses are up!!

Thats Dave123, Miss_Immature, A_D have one verse more to drop each
Sincere, Revolution, Mz_Baybee each have two verses to drop each

Make sure theyre up 2day or you may face disqualification. (see rules).

[mz_baybee]

Mr. A_D once again you try to battle me
that 8 bars mention didnt make sense, you see
talking about ur future coz winning is a mistery
to you, since never in your life you had a crew
mis-used ya rhymes and pretended it was cool
now u giving me compliments like im nice like that
you've heard me spit now its time to clap back
im capable of havin a go at u like 50 did at jah
i guess no one ever taught u how to get far
made it to 5th grade now people say thats tah-tah
it dont even bother me how im ruining your life
it'll be ruined wen mz_baybee diss u thru a mic
but whos a h*e? puhleez dat icy kiss was just like
a punch in d face to any living creatures alive
im like j.alba, i got firm *******, nice azz
wile ur like a petrol station with no freakin gas

Grrr im mad coz i got mid terms for college on saturday. Hmmm good luck to all d rest! A_D Im awaiting ur reply ;)

[Revolution]

yep ill spit first, lets see wat u got:

Hey sincere cmon man be real and honest wit urself,
next time you’ll be on a cut, yah head will be displayed ontop my book shelf

But Look at it tis way at least ur elevating ur skills so you can be “the man”
Cuz ur head on top of my shelf is the only time ur rhymes will hit the ears of any fan

Man im telling u now u couldn’t even get people up on there feet, or stand out in tis crowd
the only time will be when ur voicing for homos, as u pump beats out ur chest, cuz ur happy and proud

so As I punch keys and words that push my game to be an emcee
The closest u get to the W is in the “W”arning ya aint winning against me//

as I pull fist to ya dreams that let out the steam, ya aint gonna be zippin through tis keyz tat quick/
cuz the only thing u'll zip is ur jeans, after ya been seen sucking on another man’s erect ****//

sincere prolly acts like his a gangster, the instalment to tis reality, the next godfather/ but the only inch u get is when ur the illegitimate father to sperm childs of ten different ******* mothers//

so again you juz another rook finkin ya the next lebron
im giving u the book, my scriptures inflict powers like word of god//

so act like ya now, im the next hip hop dynasty, the evolution of ming
im spittin for my asian nation, following Jin, so be warned now the revolution begins

holla back sincere.... "a master mind is always three steps a ahead" *wink*

[Revolution]

ill reply to sincere after he drops his first verse....peace man

[Sincere]

Yo who the **** is this cat called Revolution?
Im spittin fire like i was a Rocket from Houston (nasa/nba)
Like Usher or Mobb Deep, ima let you u burn, u know how Sin mashes
wipe your remains, put you in a urn, next to Ming's-ashes
Your lil bittch high-pitched voice cant even be detected by sonar
your so useless, you'll probably even be rejected as a donor
Talkin bout my rhymes? bro u know that i spit ill
only time u'll make it on TV is aking advice from Dr. Phil
Your as skinny as your rhymes, u both suffer from anorexia
u wont be seen even if Calista Flockheart (Ally McBeal) is standin next-to-ya
Talking bout scriptures and God my words make u forget the Bible
in this battle u wont even get a vote by people who like Idols
watch me as I take-over gettin rid of this fake-Hova (Jay-z)for your own sake
change your name and get an Extreme Make-over
Remember one thing when Nas said: "There's One Love, One Life so there can only be One King" he wasnt talking bout Jin, he was talking bout Sin.

One

ima drop the 2nd in a few hours

Lyric let my man reply cuz of the time difference...............cuz its my fault if he doesnt make the deadline.....

[Sincere]

BTW Why the **** did they move this thread???????????

[Dave132]

Your drops flop more than spastics playing hop-scotch
I'ma leaves ya fuming more than asthmatics at bus stops
I could take a pen & write better rhymes in than u in the dark
U could d**k suck 'Dizzie' and ur style still aint 'lookin sharp'
Im septic, leave ya heavy headed like I slipped you anaesthetic
No wonder im sleepin on your verse! Your boring just accept it
A decrease in skill is the only thing that time has fetched
Ur like a 'grandma after a facelift' coz ur 'lines are stretched!'
You could write lines with usher, but still no one would f**king care
Even if you sang with him...^ you still would't shout the real YEAH!
Whats pathetic is this h*s s**t is just to played to receive credit
Accept it, either you just whack or rate punches that are too generic
You even f**ked up your name dont u get it no1 likes you
Challenging me?, i would't bless ya rhymes even if u had flu
Its time to end this battle and make sure this wannabe goes down!
U still would't be Queen of this damn battle if u wore a crown

bk over 2u

[Dave132]

i dunno Sincere?i got real confused wen i come on cuz i cudnt find it, i think it mite be cuz rap battles aren't classed as bein under the r'n'b section in there eyes, so they set up a new 1 4us 2battle.????

[Revolution]

Hey sincere nice spit man...well tis is my second verse man......i tried to bring it but it's about 1 am and i got class at 8am so yeah see how i went:

yo man dont act like ya a balla, cuz i got crossovers and handles that will break ankles strapped to your timbs (1)
cuz dont try to bring the game into disrepute cuz ill juz take my laces and leave you strangled and dangled of the rim (2)

so **** wat u say or and **** wat u think, so why the hell are u talkin so much bullshit
i’ll be the pilate that washes my hands of sin cuz it’ll be ur blood mixed wit soap pouring down my sink (3 and 4)

so heres a bible phrase that the scribes missed, my lyrics spilt by the pen that i grip inks words and ill spit that’ll split rivers and seas (5)
cuz like moses, i move herds of people, cuz the chariot of my words are scripted to set the Hebrews free (6)

heres wats gold, remember to open the door for any man who could be Jesus when they knock and appear (7)
cuz the father’s forgivenss wasn’t extended to resolute the infertilities of a man like you Sincere (8)

so my spit will damage like plagues of Egypt that’ll devour infrastructure to leave irreparable mass destruction (9)
throwin fist like tyson, that’ll leave your midget mind ruptured with bruises to the nerves of ur lyrical function (10)

but if i was death, i failed to act on the demand of god’s hand to command the death of first sons that spilt like the blood of the damn (11)
cuz failure was in the fact i left tis *** intact, my shadow never made contact and he lives today, but who cares u know the *** go to hell anyway (12)

so who’s tis mockery finking his lyrics are insane, tryin to spit like the truth lies within his name, but your game is too generic like everyone denyin they aint vain, so god wasted his pool of talent by the seventh, here lies the blame (13 and 14)

so as i sit bak and blaze paths like Jin why dont u admit to my win, cuz to lie is just considered a sin// admit to the truth, cuz if not im lined up like keifer sutherland aiming at ur phone booth/ camped ready to shoot and the next click will bust gaps through ya front lip and tooth (15 and 16)

"Ill blast history and speak stories of the past, cuz i came with the religious truth that u can't handle cuz along with the cross ur head is a top my mantle
call my faith in god's son, bringing heat like the rise of each day's sun, cuz u stood to me, so ill bring the apocalypse, now look who carries the cross *****"

LOL

holla back sincere its been a good battle man.....thanks for it now the votes will decide

[Revolution]

the last bit in commas dont count, it juz cuz i was flowin so yeah man....so peeps dont count it......it looks like i went over the "16 line limit" i try to break it into bars of 8 "i tried"....so yeah u can disqualify it if ya want no matter.......yeah i fink Dave is right.......we battlers are in others words too "explicit" for the RnB section......LOL haha nice spit Dave...just hate it when u try to spit and u got no flow....oh wellz peace peeps.....

[Sincere]

This is my second contribution to destroy Revolution, ima smack u
so hard back in time, you'll think i revolved your evolution.
My lyrics are indeed top-shelf they're amazin, raising the roof
while yours are as wack as D-12 without Eminem and Proof.
Im like the founder of Gatorade I reach the masses,
youre the founder of ***-Parade teach class how to reach asses.
Im impressive like the Chinese wall from an outer-space pic
youre depressive and small like your ***** and your dikk.
My rhymes so fat even Weightwatchers wont help me
Sincere's waist thats where the Champions-belt be.
No one will remember you, ima show you who's the best man
on this forum im more wanted than "****" by Shawn Desman.
I bomb u all u spit now is radiation,now go and tell your Asian Nation,so they can pass
the information onto the next generation that uve been defeated by Sin the Croatian
Did u really think u could win this battle did u really think that??
They day you'll win is the same day that 2PAC comes back.

One

Come on peeps the clock is ticking....................

[Sincere]

Yo Revolution didnt see ur 2nd post as i was posting mine

Bro u good and may the best man win, at least the voting can begin

One

[Revolution]

nice sincere....i can see someone else is flowing.....so peeps wat happens now...do we wait for everyone elses drops and then vote or wat?? it startin to lose some structure??

holla back

[Sincere]

Lol i think we should both progress to the semi's, how did Lyric get a bye??? lol

2 of the judges r from Australia, the rest is here in Europe so we'll prolly have to wait till 2morrow.

Bro do u got msn?

[Lyricalistic]

whoa this is gettin difficult in places, I think everyone is done except Mz_baybee who has one more verse to spit. I think we shud wait till 2moro to vote?? Oh and Revolution nice spit but, I might have mis-understood what "bars" ment in the Rules???
I don't think I knew exacly what it was, so can we all just make it >> 16 lines instead of bars. My mistake, I apologize, it just gets long otherwise.

[Sincere]

Mz_Baybee Miss_Immature and A_D all have to drop their last verse............

[Lyricalistic]

hahah yeh your absolutely right Sin. They have till 2moro then voting starts and they are disqualified.

[A_D]

hey mz_baybee, sorry it took a while but i been real caught up with uni coursework and all that! plus it took stupid me ages to find this new thread... anyways, here goes:

*Ding ding* is that the sound of the lunch queue?
Uh oh, mz_baybee be on the bone platter when this battle's through
Sorry girl but I'm damn hungry, feel like eatin an mc or two
Think I got the munchies for stupid a*s h*es who ain't got a clue
I'm afraid your rhymes just weren't new, your puns unfunny and few
Not a single one true, so the answer is logical: my meal is you
Comparin yourself to 50cent, what is this - a joke?
If you lucky you got the same consistency as 50's toke smoke
Half a dollar will buy you this piece of advice: get a life
B*tch comments like yours make me laugh when I got J.Alba as my wife
But don't fret I love ya really, got your epitath imprinted in my heart
"Shady Mz baybee went madly crazy so I ate the silly little tart"
Oh come now, wipe away the tear! I know: I'll put your brain in jars
Keep 'em as a souvenir, before I lock ya behind lyrical bars
I'm afraid once and for all it's over lady, mz_baybee got swallowed by AD
And in the end the boney little b*tch wasn't even the least bit tasty


Lookin forward to your reply mz_baybee, nice battle so far though! I'm out like the rockets from the playoffs...

[A_D]

@ sincere and revolution

woooh, nice going peeps! really feeling that battle! i have to give mad props to both of you guys for some hot *** rhymes, but purely thanks to that second verse of his, I have to give this one to sincere. revolution, you should definitely be in the semis as well, but the pairing being what it is, only one man can go through. big big respect bro!

i'm waiting on the other peeps to finish off now so we can vote proper, really interested to see what happens!

[mz_baybee]

dat was my most favourite verse u wrote a_d.. good one :)! yea tell me bout it, i got a mid term 4 uni on saturday... im freakin dead... lol

my 16 upcoming bars are way out of ur league
im god's daughter like nas theres no chance to besiege
ur rymes are worse than jay-z, now thats a deceit
i could critisize you all day long, how bout critique?
you stepped up to me wishin you could eat my "puh-nahnee" ehhemm
wile i stepped up to u, knowing i'll deceive u & ya "mah-nee" $$$
and all ur wacky-tacky rhymes, boi u know im tasty
you heard its not just a name coz its mz_baybee
but really, ill juz say i lovez ya even tho you fat
i figured out ur weak spot, rite behind ya back
so next time u come in, dere'll be nomore sack
u'll be left wit cut up ballz wrapped up in a pack
but hey im not here to be talking bout dat
im still only 18 and got soo much self-respect
and calling me a tart is really not an attack
its more like u tryna be the playa in dis battle rap

[MiSs_iMmAtUrE]

lol good 1 dave132..but hopefully NOT GOOD ENUF!

u say i cant be queen, but watch whoz gonna bow down
ur gonna get smacked silly, coz this galz new in town
coz bich i was born ready, n u aint ready till u've seen wut i got
i wont plot this *****, u can think wut u like bich ima let u try..wot!
u say *****..u aint goin that far, take off ur shoes wen u enter my dome
ima hit u wit chrome, till u reach back into ur chromosome
bich u dont know, just breathe in and out and just let it go
im runnin this show, u can try and pray but you wont catch my flow
wo0pz, i guess ur too slow, u better stop...n think twice
heres some advice, bich ur slippin' on thin ice
and ur thinking that i care if the whole world hated me
all i can say iz there jealous n there the only wannabe's
i could spray u with fly spray and u'd fall and cry
***** ur ***** is dry, and until the day u die
the world would jus stop n stare, thinkin u had no use here
and wut caused u 2 die wuz with the immature FEAR

[Revolution]

so if tats the count i fink everyone has dropped......so ill start to read through each verse and drop my votes asap and props for all the effort in light of exams, and time difference......

hey A_D now worries man thanks for props......vote is sincere 1 revolution 0 aight

hey sincere u from Oz yeah i got msn email is g_sananikone@hotmail.com any1 holla bak

who ever is "the one" surely is deserving considerig the talent right up in hurr

peace

[A_D]

well i've already cast my vote for sincere, and in the other battle i have to go with dave132 - but again, major props to mizz immature too, it was a damn close one there!

holler!

[Lyricalistic]

Whats that now?? Sincere got 1 vote vs Revolution, ok, I'm gna vote

- Dave123 - , in the first battle
- A_D - for the second, Mz_Baybee's 2nd verse was tight but A_D was consistant
- Sincere - in the last battle, easier to read and kept my attention although Revolution was tight, I'd give it to both if i could

That makes it:
Sincere 2 Rev 0
Dave123 2 Miss immature 0
A-D 1 Mz Baybee 0

Out.

[Sincere]

ok here are my votes..........

Dave gets my vote, both his had more punches & creativity.......miss_immature would be a nice freestyler but she didnt really had battle-verses (in my opinion)

ps. luved Dave's: "You could kiss a SARS victim n still not spit ill,
I married style n gave birth to talent, while u divorced skill "

As for A_D and Mz_Baybee...........tough one.........A_D had a strong first one.......Baybee replied nice.........A_D's second wasnt as good as his first (uni-stress?) so Baybee closed the gap a bit with her second..........but still A_D gets my vote cuz overall he scored more points...........Mz_Baybee i really hope u gonna be down in the next tournament.

So we got :

Dave 132 - Miss_Immature 3-0
A_D - Mz_Baybee 2-0
Sincere - Revolution 2-0

And mad props to y'all

One

[Revolution]

Match A: Dave some tight s**t man, both verses were fire but first verse pushed u past the edge that was some serz lines, Miss Immature both verse had good stuff, but 2nd verse was good nice flow and aight, but Dave had it in his first verse. Vote Dave (thats 4-0 to dave)

Match B: ummzz hard decision, well wat can i say both came wit the punches and flow, but i fink A_D like Shaq set the pace for the game, nice and consistent man, Mz Baybee first verse was good but 2nd one by far lived up to the name but yeah looked like u were switchin his punches into "neutral" (it's the stress of mid exams) oh wellz always next time. vote A_D (thats 3-0 to A_D)

the semis are gonna be damn competitve, best of luck to those through to semis

peace y'all im out like the Nuggets, Twolves 2004 NBA champs!! KG4MVP~~

[Revolution]

Hey lyricalistic I assume 4 zip (4-0) is KO........?? no votes needed after??

well so far its Dave123 v. Miss Immature 4-0
A_D v. Mz Baybee 3-0
Sincere v. Revolution 2-0

keep the votes comin y'all.....and.........

*For anyone out there who got game, join in on the next tourney (hopefully), step up and take a swing at some of these cats the only way is UP!! hopefully theres a bigger turn out*

failure is not in tryin or having a go, failure is from the fear of failure, to allow fear from preventing u to have a go....so cmon peeps!!

peace

[Revolution]

yo peeps where ya all at??!! this thread gettin all moldy...ahhh

holla back

[mz_baybee]

Dave123 v. Miss Immature 4-1
A_D v. Mz Baybee 3-0
Sincere v. Revolution 3-0

i had to drop some love for immature, she put it down for the ladiez so u know its all love =) dave u know u good.. =) As for a_d or myself.. i cant vote hehe... and sincere i had 2 give u dat point... this was d hardest choice i had 2 make all day.. rev is damn good, but it was hard to read his verse as opposed to urs. Rev try to make ur verses more user friendly, like in a block of 16 bars rather than spacing after each comment.. would make u be soo much better... just some thought for thought tho =)

[Revolution]

"word" mz-baybee....thoughts been acknowledged...i should of pulled harder punches hehe oh wellz....

peace y'all

[mz_baybee]

oh and im definately down wit d next tournament... lets get it!!!

[mz_baybee]

Rev u know ur good.. i like ur rhymes but just make it more eye-friendly :p

[Lyricalistic]

Ok guys were ready for round 2, I'm putting it in another thread to avoid confusion, ya dig.

[ElNiro]

Allow, how u spect replies when the host go on bad mouth people who even bother replyin

[Sincere]

@ ElNiro i dont get it.................

[Lyricalistic]

I think he needs a tissue, to wipe them tears.

[ElNiro]

haha badman eh? get a new hobby cos u cant rap

[A_D]

@ElNiro - ?? i don't get it either... anyways, don't call on people in here before you've spit your own raps, that's weak. if you want a battle i'm sure anyone would accept.

[Lyricalistic]

Biches will bich, G'z get rich

[Revolution]

yeah swing @ dis nigz and he'll prolly flinch LOL

"Allow, how u spect replies when the host go on bad mouth people who even bother replyin" ....El Niro

if u dont intend to reply cuz lyrics disses folks, tats wat every1 up in here is doin dude
tats the name of the game LOL

El Niro u got game bring it in the nxt tourney dude

till then drop sumfin in the freestyle arena post "if" u got anythin man

"word"

[ElNiro]

Y u callin me a black man? i aint black

[Lyricalistic]

@ Rev - Now you know why he won't rhyme in the Arenas. :D hahahahahah Low IQ

[Revolution]

yeah but i fink tats juz straight "normal" for him...LOL

"word"