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Lyricalistic
3 May 2004, 15:49
Same rules apply.

Fixtures::

Match D - Dave123 Vs A_D
Match E - Sincere Vs Lyricalistic

2 Verses of of 16 lines, raptastic deadline - 7th May 2004.. Shitt is gettin stinky now.

A_D
3 May 2004, 16:29
Hey every1, good luck for the 2nd round - this **** about to blow up! Alright Dave132, let me set it off...


Where you at Dave 1…3… no sorry 2 times retarded?
Stop spendin time nurseryrhymin and lets get a battle started
Once you quit playin with ya **** thinking of Brad Pitt
Maybe we can get this sh*t over wit, if you can handle it?
Listen, my rhymes dice you up good like a Hanzo blade (Kill Bill)
Droppin’ bombs on this b*tch lick a f*cking air raid
Take a pull of this lyrical miracle and prepare to get bent
A single hit leave ya smoked out n’ open to the fullest extent
I’ma teach you a lesson cos my talent is a blessin, comin at ya god-sent
Lets see what you got h*e, but like A.Cole (soccer player) I already know ya can’t defend
In the 1st round I couldn’t stand ya moanin, but please don’t ever stop talking
So I can pop round ya girl’s house, stalking, and give her a bonin
Then go home and get off all alone at the thought of her moanin
Ya see its just her a*s was a’ight and her t*ts were fine
But her cooch was too dry cos she fiftynine
Face it Dave, you’re my rhyming slave, and soon you’re p*ssy too will be mine.


Haha, that's 5 quality minutes of taking a revision break for ya. Holla back!

Lyricalistic
3 May 2004, 18:35
Yo Sincere, you know ya my boy, and I respect ya and your girl, this is strictly business. No love lost. 1

I be rap pioneer, breakin out of nowhere
into this world premiere, tear a hole through you ear
leaving severe consequences to Sincere's rap career
his mental sphere filled with unmeasurable fear
it's clear you square, **** that you *****, take that shitt up the rear (dikk)
you interfere with my business in the fiscal year
its best you dissappear, and if you ever reappear
you gettin buried 6 feet under here, you gettin
pisssed on by all my doggs before you layed in
****** me be the 8th deadly "Sin", I splash your face with gin
then throw flames on you skin and "let it burn" like Usher Raymond
you cursed next of kin born deformed and thin twisted bones within
got a dikk that double for a siamese twin, lookin just like him
why you searching? something you missin? your ***** and word
are worthless, you gettin shot then left broke like watchin
Scarface backwards coz the video rewinding

o.u.t

Revolution
4 May 2004, 04:14
ooohhh shiat its on all up in hurr...guys some tight stuff....Lyricalistic man u like A.D.D on multis "tight"....LOL and A_D got tat "consistent" flow.....fellas it gonna be hard to vote?? hey the "losers" from prelim rounds get to vote on tis as well right??

holla back

Dave132
4 May 2004, 11:30
hey sup soz i didnt vote in last round but i only *** out of hospital 2day bin in since thursday.i'll prob drop my first verse 2moz cuz i gotta go bk 2hospital in a bit

Sincere
4 May 2004, 14:54
Here we go.............

Its my turn now, you cocked, aimed, shot and missed kid
u fuccin lipstick wearing dipshyt, at gunpoint i'll make u strip quick
u wonder Who shot ya? but this aint Notorious Big ****
Sincere did it, i come equipped with punches and kicks
you lose grip, slip and start to trip bitcch
Im the whizz-kid, Tony Montana's drugs?? I shipped it!
**** your dogs, i gotta crew (thats) black and white like Schindler's List kid
who would love to screw, smack and bite the **** out of Lyricalistic
Like the mafia fucc burying you six feet deep
I'll steep your body in concrete and let it seep
heres a nice one : you look at pics of Elton John and start to drool (right)away
you lick so many lips and dikks people call you LL Cool ***
This was your final warning dont step on my playground
or ill make u disappear faster than a greyhound
tell the peeps why you gave yourself an automatic bye in the first round
just to hide the fact youre pathetic and got the worst sound


One

Revolution
5 May 2004, 04:20
ooohhh **** fark my man Sin u came hard, tats some grimey shiat son....."word" hey dave sorry to hear bout ya mishap cuz....hope everythin turns out good..take it easy

like i said tis is one hektik semi.....

peace y'all

Dave132
5 May 2004, 11:05
cheers Revolution im chillin!!!
heres mine

dropping first against me?...that makes A_D a suicidal
leave him drenched in blood... for taking on a battle idol
produce phat rhymes, leave you like 'Rick Waller', scared to Face your health
i be belting rhymes like this is a hold up, so you better brace yourself
shake s**t all you want boy...youre still too underqualified
you even dream you can slew me, you best wake up.. then apologise
exert forces from wrists, breakin laws like Newton rapin physicists
while your thoughtless written s**t is more played than dramatists
this spitter is ruthless, leavin u toothless, f**k spit ill vomit mucus
lyrical bombin proves it, leavin your whole conscious bruised b**ch
beacuse when i hold the weapon b**ch you just fold in seconds
on my chrome dont step kid u get choked with ur own intestines
this s**t is complete, a romance for the kill, layin in a he****
this fatal verse just orgasmed the way i played with the words
as a writer A_D wouldn’t have value if him and ‘Wordsworth’ conspired
im getting tighter, you aint gonna have a ‘good year’ so RE-TIRE!


* Rick Waller - the fat bloke from 1st Pop Idol in England
* Wordsworth - famous writer
* Goodyear - make of car tyres

A_D
5 May 2004, 13:32
Damn Dave, you're mysteriously delirious, your **** is ****** tedious
Wipe the cuum from your lips and lets talk serious
All you good for is cursing, this bich only know the physical phat
The lessor agressor is the fool's succesor, but for right now let's **** that
You fudge-packing, back-stabbing, flow-lacking shitt sack
Crackin like a flat cap when the mack attack ya like his rhymes' on smack
You on the wrong track, it's a motherfukking wrap, pack your step homes
You're throwing with stones spittin all the wrong tones in the house of glass
Your whack class is grass-roots, your skill ran outa gas cos it fade fast
The shady secret of your trade is buying raps in packs of 'ready-made'
Shitt's abouta escalate cos Dave's been outplayed, his welcome over-stayed
As chair of Lucifer's lair the accolade take care ya get a scare from this like a recurring nightmare
My words cast the bare death stare in ya eyes that'll tear ya up fair and square cos I no longer ****** care
Let's get all 'Wordsworth' on this bich's head: "slogging through death's watery bed
Through ****** blood-encrusted entrails of Dave I'll tread"
Siegried & Roy's toyboy might have rightly enjoyed his coy moment in the spotlight
But your no ******* idol and I don't ******* like you so just **** off alright?

A_D
5 May 2004, 13:41
hey dave, like your verse man! hope you doin good and all - hospitals suck apart from the nurses.
the semis so far are killin every1, tight flows all around. peace y'all!

Dave132
6 May 2004, 07:58
i dont need to p**s myself to laugh, i get it all from your s**t i analyze
this time bro you the one goin down, people know that i hit to paralyze
in shady ways i'll rack your brain, your the one im laughin at
a doctor to the english language, im excelling after-math
i clocked this bout, thinkin damn this battle is gona be hot throughout
but after your verse, im suprised my norton anti-virus hadnt blocked it out
he frontin like theres heat in his verse, his f**kin speech is absurd
ya need to reverse, cuz i'll punch u out faster than timekeepers at work
i'll kill & resurrect u every year on ur birthday
but video's is the only time you hit the word-play
ya diss missed us u h*e, but its not like u got on MTV
you suck to much the glass aint half full its completely empty
my tempers too short and heated, burnin you with a paradise
Touch me and ya sizzle, my bloods at least 5 hundred degrees farenheit
even if he tried this army streetfighter couldn't show 'Guile'
i got this battle sewn, while busting ya own style!

Revolution
6 May 2004, 14:57
ah **** man fark Dave and A_D man why u gotta make it so hard to pick the winner?? =P
fark both ya verses were wit quality and some tight shi@t.....i drop my vote after i do some thinkin

good to see hospital hasnt hindered ya skills dave....take it easy

peace y'all

ill holla back

Dave132
6 May 2004, 15:27
cheers A_D & Revolution, nah it hasnt hindered my limited skills as yet.nice verses A_D u dropped sum proper tight s**t!nuff respect!!
only sincere & lyricalistic to drop there final verses now

Lyricalistic
6 May 2004, 20:59
Whoa this is a Tuffy


your whole rhyme revolve round homosexuality
seems your reality is filled with *** mentality
all you spat is dikks, lipstick and Elton John shitt
you spit shitt, throw at me all you want it don't hit shitt
you thick shitt, bend down and lick shitt
don't you know I'm the rap communicator,
dictator, abbreviator, beef creator lyrical Terminator
****** you up like *** in a elevator, taking you into the skies
look up in my eyes and see you life's demise, you loose that disguise
tears roll down your eyes, you been telling lies,
confessing, say you haven't been "Sincere" (double meaning)
"I was just playin, didn't know I'd end up here
I was just praying, you were nothing to fear, but now it's clear
I can't match your natural flair, please let me live Lyricalistic"
I say "dikk sucker don't you know I'm masochistic
I enjoy killing, some say I'm mad even sadistic" (Gunshot Sound "Blauww")

Out..

Sincere
7 May 2004, 00:29
yo Im about to give you a taste of my world
but you prolly tasted me already when u kissed your girl
You got a shotgun?? All you seem to do is shoot blanks
Im from the Balkan, where we use grenades, missiles and tanks
you wont make it on the screen even if you lived in te building from Sliver*G
get a job as a mailman so you can work on your delivery
you could be on laxative and still wont drop **** thats ill
u should really stop battlin, just admit u lack skill
You've been lookin for lines to defeat me, isnt he a madman?
Let me save you some time, u better off lookin for Osama Bin Laden
After this battle you'll regret that you ever crossed me
Im the lyrical Napoleon, ive won more battles than u have lost G
Lets put it to an end, so you wont pretend that you'll be victorious
your girl likes to call me Big and i dont even look like the Notorious
Now Lyricalistic be like, "Sincere you're tight, I adore you"
next tournament u can borrow lines, no wait.......I'll even write for you!

Let the voting begin.................



Sliver = movie in which every room is taped (Sharon Stone William Baldwin)


ONE

Revolution
7 May 2004, 03:45
Ooohh **** im'a say it again y'all came hard like Mo fo......damn mad props to all ya Lol
soz guys but i gotta critically analyse tis shi@t

MATCH A Lyricalistic v. Sincere
Verse 1
Punches - Sincere
Mutlis - Lyricalistic
Flow - Sincere/Lyrics
Creativity/originality/Complexity - Sincere came wit much complex stuff

3-2

verse 2
Punches - Sincere
multis - Lyrics
flow - Sincere/Lyrics
complexity/creativity - Sincere got it hurr he came wit the flair, last line was good but the you wit you ahh juz remember bring the flow, hey lyrics u had some techincal shi@at as well but I know u got sh@it much betta then tis man how come u gotta rhyme shitt wit shitt wit shitt in ur first couple lines bring down the whole complexity of ya lyrics dude??

3-2
total 6-4 to sincere
vote goes to Sincere
both of you guys came good man...but i was feelin sincere betta he came wit the grimey ****, but if theres gotta be onle "ONE" then its sincere soz lyrics

Revolution
7 May 2004, 04:04
next match up is MATCH B: A_D v. Dave132

same routine boys

verse 1
punches - Dave 132 (Tis was the Illest verse from tis battle, again dude u set it up in the first round...is there a trend?? Lol)
flow - Dave/AD
multi - Dave
complexity/creativity - Dave/AD

4-2

verse 2
punches - dave 132 (you had some good punches A-D but Dave punches juz had tat lil bit extra flair to it,soz A_D)
flow - Dave/ A_D
multi - A_D
complexity/creativity - Dave/A_D

3-3 I couldnt break tis verse A_D came good in the crunch but Dave came wit the consistency
total 7-5 to Dave 132
My vote goes to Dave he again set it up in the first round, A_D u brought tat consistency but Dave juz had tat lil bit more in the tank

Good battle to all you boys y'all deserve a round of a applause (I would sign u all but im not a CEO of a record company Lol hahaha)

so far MATCH A - Lyrics v. Sincere (0-1)
MATCH B - A_D v. Dave 132 (0-1)

Dave132
7 May 2004, 07:16
Lyricalistic vs Sincere
this was a good battle guys both of u had creative lyrics,good multi's & sum sweet punches!very tuff 2 choose a winner i thought Sincere's first verse was good especially liked the line
'u wonder Who shot ya? but this aint Notorious Big ****'
'Sincere did it, i come equipped with punches and kicks'
that was sum tight ****.Sinceres first verse was better than lyricalistics overall, he just seemed to be that bit more creative than Lyricalistic.soz bro
In verse 2 Lyricalistic came at Sincere stronger than he did in the first, the wordplay was used more effectively & it flowed a lot better.the only thing that stopped Lyricalistic winning it for me was i dont think u came hard enuf on the punches bro!
Sinceres second verse wasn't as gud as his first but he was still creative and dropped decent punches.very good battle guys, it is really hard to pick a winner
my vote goes to Sincere he just bout won it for me wiv his first verse

Dave132
7 May 2004, 07:18
Match A - Lyricalistic vs. Sincere (0-2)
Match B - A_D vs. Dave 132 (0-1)

A_D
7 May 2004, 09:23
Sin & Lyricalistic... damn, shitt was off the chain! really hard to choose a winner between you guys but i thought sincere just had that first verse packed so tight i gotta give it to him. lyricalistic, you're 2nd verse brought you back into the frame in my books, definitely feeling the "dictator, abbreviator, beef creator lyrical Terminator, ****** you up like *** in a elevator" haha. all the same bro, i think Sin just had the phater punches in this battle, but mad props to both of ya!! the flow was defo smooth as a baby's bottom and the beef was sizzlin, but there ya go, the decision had to be made!

Lyricalistic 0 - 3 Sincere
A_D 0 - 1 Dave132

Sincere
7 May 2004, 10:13
Thanx bro's i really appreciate y'all choose me
as for Lyric u know u my bro man........

A_D and Dave ima print yall verses cuz i need some time to vote and i wont be around a pc for a couple of hours.

MiSs_iMmAtUrE
7 May 2004, 10:30
well for Lyricalistic or Sincere both nice rhymes u've both got the flow but i gotta give this up 4 Sincere i really enjoyed ur 2nd rhyme n Lyricalistic that thing about homosexuality was just off no affence...
n for A_D n Dave132 the first rhymes were niceee i was feelin em but Dave132 managed to do better in the second 1...A_D good rhyme but Dave132 managed to slip in

it was a good round i must say..u've made it this far use deserve a pat on ur baxXx lolz
Lyricalistic 0 - 3 Sincere (0-4)
A_D - Dave132 (0-2)

Lyricalistic
7 May 2004, 11:40
hahah I know, Sin came at me hard. I won't make no excuses, his was better thats why I had to step up my game in the second verse, but its too late by then.
Congratulations, I will be supremely dissapointed if you don't win now. :D :D


Oh The Voting. Lemmi Read It One More Time..........

Lyricalistic
7 May 2004, 11:46
Miss Immature -

The line you are reffering to is:

"your whole rhyme revolve round homosexuality
seems your reality is filled with *** mentality"

This was a attempting to say that when your ***, your brain is ***, so all you chat is ***. Simple. I was tryna say that Sin's rhyme is full of *** shitt.. you know how a battle rap is?? you havta switch what the other rapper got against him??

No Offence Sin, I had to try summit!!!

Dave132
7 May 2004, 11:59
@lyricalistic
i thought that was one of ur best punches, i understood wot u were gettin at, but then if u didnt understand where u were cumin from i spose ppl cud get confused.one of ur best lines in the battle though easily

mz_baybee
7 May 2004, 12:02
Lyricalistic (0) - (5) Sincere
A_D (0) - (3) Dave132

Sincere u gettin better n better.. really tight verses u spat.. ;)
lyrical u lacked originality, to much *** talk is really not funny after a wile, overall alrite tho...

A_D very weak dude! Dave ripped ya.. Dave i also hope u get better wit wateva u got probz wit... and i hope to see u all in d next tournament..

Lyricalistic
7 May 2004, 12:04
Hmm, yeh I like both rappers but gna havta go wit Dave123, his verses just keep gettin stronger and stronger, and I think him and Sin would make a good final.

Lyricalistic 0 - Sincere 4
Dave123 - 3 - A_D - 0

has everyone voted???

Dave132
7 May 2004, 12:24
we waitin 4 sincere to vote

A_D
7 May 2004, 12:36
woo, final with sin n dave gun be hot! dave my man, better win this one now that you finished me, lol! you defo packed the better raps homes so big props, you the deserved winner! don't think i ain't gonna hit back at ya in the next tournament when there's no more exams n coursework though, hehe ;)

Dave132
7 May 2004, 13:19
fair play A_D u was a good battler i had 2dig a little deeper to get rid off u, i'l defo b lovin a rematch if we ever have 1, ur tuff competition real close battle havent had a battle that close in a while.i'll try my best for u bro 2win this i spose it depends how im rhymin on the day, but ima give u a shoutout if i do!!

Sincere
7 May 2004, 19:42
sup peeps i read the battle a few times and i had to decide to give my vote to Dave.
He was more consisent thruout the battle, eventho A D came much better on the 2nd verse.
But with such a 1st verse like Daves its difficult to top that...........

So Dave - A D 5-0
Sincere - Lyricalistic 5-0

Lyric let me know when u opening the finals............

One

sbks
8 May 2004, 19:16
**** **** dis is hard sin u won coz yo gd lol
A_D ***** dave up my god dave u were best in starters of world cup but a_D ***** u soz man
IM NEW HERE

Lyricalistic
8 May 2004, 20:55
The final is in another thread Y'all.