The Battle Arena: Rap World Cup FINAL 2004 REVISITED

[Lyricalistic]

@ Dave132 and Sincere, post verses in here. If Sliderxx or any other trouble maker posts anything up, ignore it.. They'll go away.

[Sliderxx]

Ahwww u ashamed U so ugly its ok i feel you pain brah. How ever u come at me Am comin back 10 times harder "Spits on your Grave"...

[Dave132]

hey sup guys, 1st verse
u no its not personal sincere!

I know you crumble with ease, where I knockabout in this standoff killing
You underachieve, cause ive stamped down your little chance of winning
You jack off and couldn’t make a C*m-Back if u used lubricant as a hand wash
We stand off, you couldn’t 'Roc-A-Fella' even if you rhymed 'Posh'
Ur the sorta dork to use gun talk! Claim u'll smash 'em wiv ur nines?
I know ur a gimp-son (Gibson) but 'Christ!' put some 'passion' in ur lines!
Sincere, u don't 'a-maize' me, but its similar.... coz ur 'in-bread' (inbred)
U ugly freak! To scare people in battles, dont spit, post ur pic up instead!
I hit raw at ya, spit all ur s**t in 'BIG' and u still aint 'RIPpin' or 'Notorious'
Ur a 'bender' and ur like 'Beckham' coz b***h 'u aint Victoria's!!' (victorious)
Its a keystyle battle and you fumble that! changin opponents and switchin
But all the time you in other threads arranging components and b***hin
U rap the same! but in battle your not supposed to see the symmmetry
Sincere lacks a brain! so go home an try compose a key to finish me
I show no flaws, but the more you try, the more you become a disgrace
Dont reply, if I wanted come back, I would wipe your girl’s face!

[Dave132]

Sincere: can we make it that the last verse has to be in by tomorrow cuz of all the **** with sliderxx?

[Sincere]

I dunno what u mean Dave............is this thread closing?
Nothing personal HAZ


You think you can rip me, son dont even bother
u couldnt rip me if Jack the Ripper was your father
Battling me? In this final you gettin tossed by this pro
132? is that the amount of battles you lost in a row?
Yeah i remeber you, i defeated u when u was Dave84(fo')
Talkin bout my pic is ugly, go ahead it dont bug me
Ive seen your mug and you look like a grub* G
U ****** lil maggot keep crawlin in submission
Remember when i let u and your boys audition?
I was the American soldier y'all the Iraqis in all kind of positions
Call me Sean Paul cuz you know i Rock Dutty* boy
only time u shine is when Ali G mentions the "batti-boy"
At least i get girls, someting fantastic, it often occurs to me
while your face looks like your azz, did u ever consider plastic surgery?
Im done for now ima put this case to rest-dude
for your interest its best u never left the test-tube

*grub is a maggot
Dutty is Jamaican for dirty

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[Sliderxx]

Sincere lacks a brain! so go home an try compose a key to finish me

huuuuuuuuuu!!! Wot a Rhyme Killed Him der. Thumbs up Dave

[Lyricalistic]

Slider I'm in the other thread waiting for your rap. hahahahahahaha.

[Revolution]

yo shi@at tats some dope lines both u boys were two thumbs up....can't wait for the second verse from you boys......

is it two or three verse battle?? anywayz ya guys are pushin all expectations out the roof

keep it up

PEACE

[Lyricalistic]

Those verses are Ill, second is gna be sicker.

[Sincere]

im gonna drop tonight only i dunno if im gonna make it b4 midnight, cuz i wont be around a pc..............so judges dont be cruel.lol

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[Stunt101]

this is some ****** long final.. no wonder ur rhymes are alright.. if u spend like 2 ****ing days writing them.. this is ****.. u should just cancel it.. and declare both these mans... LOSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS

[Dave132]

yeah s**t sorry bout the time had connection problems for the last few days everytime ive tried to post the internet has cut off, just had the repair man come n sort it out.
finally heres my final verse

Spitting 1st was probably the only way Sincere would or could ever be on top of me,
Your location is top40, your on my property, i'll charge you rent, like its monopoly,
Causing murderous scripts, scream ‘STD’ you know this style be ‘Sick’,
Cant open a can of whoop *** on me, they sealed with ‘child proof lids’,
I be old skool boi, ‘classic’ enuff to wear out the style of ‘Reeboks’,
Full of ‘sleaze talks’, got ya worn out quicker than a fat man who ‘speed walks’,
Building up to a cataclysmic ‘climatic’ spittin lyrical spits like an ‘automatic’,
Sin step down, cause im just gonna leave you gaspin for air like an ‘asthmatic’,
Tried to stop a ‘g’, but couldn't ‘string’ words together, even if I gave ya some ‘emcee rope’,
I’ll ‘stamp’ any hope, by ‘tearing open’ your ‘2nd class posts’, easy as an ‘envelope’,
Shoot lemon juice in your wounds coupled with spittin' inSALTS..i'm sayin' your fake,
I can win by jus hypin' myself...cos your talk is CHEAP...so of course i can AFFORD mistakes,
This **** don't deserve feedback, we can see it's a hopeless lesson,
So I'll take a time-out now, and tell you what the voters reckon,
"This Sincere, he can't battle for ****, I just thank God he doesn't sing!",
You could own a 3-storey car park... and still not be a Multi King!

[Sincere]

Its been six days since u last dropped and this is what u came up-with?
Dont worry bout the rent, i gave it to your girl, cuz thats where I'M on top-kid
Dave rattles off "Im gonna defeat Sin cuz my style is so sick"
the only "battle" you gonna win is when you "beat" yo dikk
Stop actin like **** are your enemies, you're such a nasty liar
cuz i heard your friend with "STD" "Bust (y)a" and "Lit yo azz on fire"
What im doing to to you is sick, its pure ruination
but i'll end it quick, like i was one of your premature ejaculations
My punches hit you hard leave you shocked and perplexed
whats wrong? you look like u just caught your parents having ***
Im the lyrical Stinger* known as a "heatseeker"
when im done you'll be beggin Kayslay* for a job as a "Streetsweeper"
And whats that shytt bout u being a virgin i got it by hearsay
no girl wants u, here's a dictionary, cuz your only interested in "wordplay"
Im tired now its been a long tourney may the best man win, word up!
until then stand in your thong, cuz Sin pulled your skirt up........

Its been nice folks........Dave is good..........let the voting begin and start the next tour...........i was away 4 the wekeend thats why i couldnt drop earlier.

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[Sincere]

Sup judges y'all gonna vote???

So the next tourney can start cuz i know some peeps are dying to kick some keystyles.........

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[Revolution]

yeah my votes up......I think Dave came ready to play Sin.....he grasped the title in his first verse...like i said b4 dave set the win for tis battle in the first verse.....Sin ya first one was aight seem to play it out to netural though but still "ill"

but both ya guys second verse were serz tight couldnt judge from tat...so much creativity, wordplay and str8 ill spit

but my votes goes to Dave...juz mad creativity not to say Sin wasnt creative (Sin looks like you played off him a bit)...no matter

~Peace~

"I am the Wolf that will slaughter Kings" Twolves one step closer to championship glory!!

[MiSs_iMmAtUrE]

nice one ur rhymes went off in the beginning dave kikt it off, sincere ur rhyme was good but dave pulled it thru..in the second round dayam both good rhymes but dave managed 2 creep in so my vote goes 2 dave..he ript me hard side ways wen he battled me n now look where hez at lolz
newayz i luved the way u mentioned all those ppl dave put heaps of metephores n sincere urz was full on niceee..

dave132: 2 - sincere: 0

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[Lyricalistic]

Hmmm intresting. I also found it very difficult to judge those verses. Dave's first verse was sick guns were blazing. Sincere stepped up his game in the second verse to play Dave at his own game. Both had tight verses, but in the end to distiguish between the two I had to break it down to rap basics. It seemed as if Dave's verses are more like poems then battle rap verses, as if you try rapping them at speed you'll find that they go on a bit and the last line is not that different to the next, you expect things and gets a lil repetitive. Sincere's second verse did it for me, simple coz I thought he was down and he come back with a rap I read more then a few times it had more flow to it, try rapping Sin's second verse fast, it will go. So my vote goes to Sincere for flow and content. Dave's was bit slow, too many syllabels in a sentence.

[A_D]

Wooah that was definitely a hot battle. Dave's first verse was ***** impressive, the wordplay, punches, metaphors...damn he had the whole thing going, that was cool. Sin's comeback was hot also, bustin Dave's style with some nice punches, and the tighter flow but I thought overall the first round went to Dave. The 2nd round was just off tha chain! Good strong verse by Dave again, but I thought some of the punches were a bit more hit-and-miss compared to the hard-hitting first round. Some of those lines were just a bit too stretched and the flow suffered. Sin's 2nd verse was better, good metas, multis, punches, the whole package, so 2nd round goes to Sin...Now then... overall I still have to give it to Dave because he was just a bit more creative and had the sicker and cleverer punches with both verses combined. Peace y'all, that was a hot *** final!

[Lyricalistic]

Whats that then? Dave the winner? 3-1 congratulations bro. On to next rap tournament.

[Revolution]

congrats dave......applause for runner up Sin......like lyrics says on to the nxt rap tournament........


peace out y'all

[Sincere]

Dave u the deserved winner................congrats bro.......if i had to vote id voted for u too lol.........up for the next tourney........u know i want my rematch.......


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[Dave132]

cheers guys!much appreciated, u gud 2 sin i didnt think i was gona win against u!!im gud 4 the rematch bro anytime anyplace.